literature

A Poor Man's Villanelle

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Literature Text

Uninspired witticism,
A faux-insouciant attitude;
Blatant act of plagiarism.

Disrespectful euphemism;
Some pietistic gratitude,
Uninspired witticism.

Questionable symbolism:
Interpretative latitude.
Blatant act of plagiarism.

Heavy-handed criticism.
Ironic lack of aptitude,
Uninspired witticism.

Well-intentioned pessimism;
Clichéd, generic platitude.
Blatant act of plagiarism—

Irritating mannerism,
Oblivious beatitude;
Uninspired witticism...
Blatant act of plagiarism.
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LostintheWhirlwind's avatar
Your attempt at annoyance succeeded. Grr. Trochaic, iambic, trochaic...grr...

I like this, especially the last line. It really punches your point without making the poem oxymoronic. Very nice.