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Apotheosis: Prometheus Re-Bound

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I thought I saw each day flow by,
from final rest to birthing cry:
the total sum of deeds undone
are bleached beneath the blazing sun
and offered up to passers-by.

The crows will claw, the seagulls cry,
the terns will carry tidbits high,
the pterodactyls catch and run—
    I thought I saw.

But vivisect or vivify,
the price will never be as high
as back when I had purchased one
brand-new, and clearly underdone;
to Zeus in gratitude, I'll testify:
    "I thought I saw."
a·poth·e·o·sis n. 1) The act of deification. 2) The high point or climax. 3) The epitome or best example.

Originally inspired by a timed prompt in the #CRLiterature chatroom; reworked into something a bit larger in scope.

:bulletpurple: Yes, this is a rondeau. The extra foot in the penultimate line is deliberate: it's a modified alexandrine, and its inclusion has been my small contribution to the form.
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FuzzyHoser's avatar
I'm loving the rhythm in this. Gorgeous work! :)